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I do not desire to be won
to be gotten
to be obtained

I want to be Captured

so capture me-
with the fluidity of your kiss

and the rapture
of your touch

Steal me from myself and make me yours

touch my spirit
with the gentle warmth of your caress

Embrace me
with the lucid Fire that glows from within your eyes
And drown me in the perfect floods of your mysterious passion
and i shall stand forever yours
In this poem i tried to describe what a woman wants, on some level. I do not want to be 'convinced' to fall in love, i don't want it to be a passive decsion that i make because "it's been a whole year". Don't be afraid, be who you really are, shine as yourself, and then you leave me no choice but to fall in love with you.
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aki-no-ame Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2004
oooooohh...pretty. again, lovely imagry(damn it, i'm going to look that up...) i also know what that feels like. dag, yo, i get goosebumps from your stuff!! ^_^
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Poetic-Essence Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2004   Writer
hahaha, u r so funny, gr-8 sense of humor, and thanks again 4 your super encouraging feedback! :):):)
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SETTEZ Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2004  Student
Thats really great... much lighter than the others... show a different side of you.

A really emotional and heart felt poem. simple, easy to read... but very thought full and meaning filled.

im adding it to my favorites!!
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Poetic-Essence Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2004   Writer
Thank u, i am so glad u liked it! I really appretiate your support :)
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vanDara Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2004
its good... an honest evaluation of your feelings.
truth for truth i suppose.
but is it really what a (any) woman wants? or is it more to your specific desires.

but i feel the same way, more or less...
but honey, i dont think such a creature of this maleness exists outside our fondest fantasies. but we can long for, and wait till he does appear. but i already know its a long wait.
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Poetic-Essence Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2004   Writer
you are so right, sigh... a girl's gotta dream :)
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robot23 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2004
very passionate
good stuff
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Poetic-Essence Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2004   Writer
:) thank you very much, i'm new so i really appretiate the feedback
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robot23 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2004
its hard to get feedback on poetry i find
so i often give it
:)
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Poetic-Essence Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2004   Writer
:) and it is much appretiated
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